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As frozen hearts begin to burn
The tables start to turn
I wonder if you'll ever know
I care
As memories are being made
The seasons start to fade
I wonder if you'll ever know
I care
A fire burning bright
But still losing the fight
I wonder if you'll ever know
It's you
A division of the heart
So close together, far apart
I wonder if you'll ever know
It's you
These feelings that I'm hiding
My emotions all colliding
I wonder if you'll ever know
The truth
The chances that I take
Always knowing what's at stake
I wonder if you'll ever know
The truth
All the poems that I keep
Spark my dreams while I'm asleep
As I wonder if I'll ever
Get the chance
As my feelings keep colliding
Are my thoughts really worth hiding?
If given the chance
Would you ask me to dance?
The tables start to turn
I wonder if you'll ever know
I care
As memories are being made
The seasons start to fade
I wonder if you'll ever know
I care
A fire burning bright
But still losing the fight
I wonder if you'll ever know
It's you
A division of the heart
So close together, far apart
I wonder if you'll ever know
It's you
These feelings that I'm hiding
My emotions all colliding
I wonder if you'll ever know
The truth
The chances that I take
Always knowing what's at stake
I wonder if you'll ever know
The truth
All the poems that I keep
Spark my dreams while I'm asleep
As I wonder if I'll ever
Get the chance
As my feelings keep colliding
Are my thoughts really worth hiding?
If given the chance
Would you ask me to dance?
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This might be a WIP, I haven't decided if I want to continue it. Any opinions on that would be really appreciated 
I started this idea this morning, the first two lines just came to me. Later on in the shower the idea just kind of evolved and I wrote it out in shaving cream on the wall to help me remember
I was almost out of shaving cream though so it barely worked.
The pattern kind of fizzles out towards the end, and I dunno. It just felt like something that should happen. I feel really good about this one, it actually had some feeling when I wrote it.
I started this idea this morning, the first two lines just came to me. Later on in the shower the idea just kind of evolved and I wrote it out in shaving cream on the wall to help me remember
I was almost out of shaving cream though so it barely worked. The pattern kind of fizzles out towards the end, and I dunno. It just felt like something that should happen. I feel really good about this one, it actually had some feeling when I wrote it.
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Yeah I really like this. I can hear the beat so well in it that I almost hear music! Great read!